Dear Esmiron
Great to see some in-text references with striking facts and figures. This kind of information makes for a good ‘hook’! A term we use to talk about the kind of information we use in a good introductory paragraph to grab your readers attention and make them want to read more. Good stuff! 😊
You have also used information from your reading well to provide evidence of what you are writing about … Yay!
Do you think dedicated bus lanes might work.
Andy